Friday, April 03, 2009

Simplicity Conundrum

Read this

Two young persons of opposite genders, proceeded toward the apex of a natural geologic protuberance.

The purpose of their expedition was to procure a sample of fluid hydride of oxygen in a large vessel, the exact size of which was omniously omitted from the record.

As the male person precipitously descended, he consequently sustained severe damage to the upper cranial portion of his anatomy.

A similar fate befell the female, who immediately after the male person, performed a self-rotational translation oriented in the same direction having been traversed by the young man.


Now read this


Jack and Jill went up the hill

To fetch a pail of Water

Jack fell down, broke his crown

Jill came tumbling after.


Judge for yourself. Which is simpler? It has become fashionable these days to use flowery language to describe even mundane things and thereby making it difficult to comprehend.

Election fever has caught up with me. Vote for simple writing style. Jai Ho to simple English

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